The Writer Who Rewrites

Rewriting in writing is different from revision, and the difference matters. Revision works on what exists — it improves, clarifies, tightens, cuts. Rewriting starts again — it produces a new version of the piece from a different angle, with a different structure, or from a place in the argument that the first draft had not yet reached. A writer who revises is improving a draft. A writer who rewrites is writing the piece again, having learned from the first attempt what the piece actually needs to be.

The distinction matters because the decision of when to revise and when to rewrite is one of the more consequential decisions in the writing process. A draft that is revised when it should be rewritten tends to produce a piece that is better in its parts and still wrong in its whole — technically improved but fundamentally unchanged from a version that was not working. A draft that is rewritten when revision would have been sufficient wastes time and risks losing what the first draft had found.

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What I Do Between Drafts

The time between drafts is not empty time. It is, in many cases, the most productive part of the writing process — but it is productive in ways that do not look like productivity, which is why it is often misunderstood and undervalued. A writer who has finished a draft and set it aside is not resting from writing. They are doing a different kind of work, and understanding what that work is makes it possible to do it more deliberately.

Between drafts, the thinking that the draft has started continues without the draft present. The argument that was only partially formed in the writing develops in the background. The problem that was visible but not yet solvable in the draft becomes, in the days away from it, a problem with a shape that revision can address. The piece is absent; the thinking about the piece is not.

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How I Plan a Series of Posts

Planning a series of posts is a different activity from planning individual posts, and treating it as simply more of the same tends to produce a different kind of failure. A site that publishes individual posts without thinking about how they relate to each other tends to produce a body of work that is competent post by post and incoherent as a whole — a collection of pieces that cover similar territory from similar angles without building anything cumulatively.

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Writing and Attention

Concentration and attention get used interchangeably in most writing advice, and the confusion costs something. Concentration is the ability to stay on a task despite distraction — it’s a muscle, and it fatigues the way muscles do. Attention, in the sense that matters for writing, is different: it’s the quality of contact between a writer and the sentence in front of them. A writer can concentrate for four hours and produce nothing worth keeping. A writer can attend to a single paragraph for twenty minutes and get somewhere true. Writing and attention are related, but treating them as synonyms is where a lot of productivity advice goes wrong.

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The Writer Who Finishes Too Quickly

Finishing writing too quickly is a less discussed problem than not finishing at all, but it is a real one. The writer who cannot finish — who circles the piece indefinitely, who holds the draft in permanent revision, who never presses publish — receives a lot of attention in writing advice. The writer who finishes too quickly receives very little, perhaps because finishing looks like productivity and the problems it produces are less visible than the problem of the unfinished piece.

But finishing too quickly has its own costs, and they show up in the work. The piece that was published before it was ready, the argument that needed one more pass to become fully coherent, the essay that arrived at its ending before the thinking had been completed — these are the products of finishing too quickly, and they are recognisable to readers even when they cannot name exactly what is wrong.

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How I Build an Argument

Building an argument in writing is not the same as having one. A writer can have a clear position — a view they hold, a claim they want to make — without knowing how to move a reader from the opening to that position through writing that earns it. The argument that exists in the writer’s mind arrives there through intuition, experience, and accumulated thinking. The argument that appears on the page has to be constructed, step by step, in a form that the reader can follow.

This construction is a learnable skill, and it has a sequence. Not a rigid sequence that every piece must follow exactly, but a working sequence of moves that a writer can apply, adjust, and depart from when the piece requires it.

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Writing the Middle

The middle of a piece is where most writing fails. Not the opening, which receives the most deliberate attention, and not the ending, which is brief enough to be controlled. The middle — everything between the opening that earns attention and the ending that releases the reader — is where the piece either delivers what it promised or quietly stops doing so.

Writing the middle is the hardest part to write well, and the hardest to diagnose when it goes wrong. A weak opening is usually visible. A weak ending announces itself. A weak middle tends to be felt rather than identified — the reader’s attention drifts, the piece loses its forward momentum, and neither the reader nor sometimes the writer can say exactly where it happened.

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The Difference Between a Subject and an Argument

Subject and argument in writing are often treated as the same thing — but the difference between them is one of the most important distinctions a writer can make, and one of the least discussed. A subject is what a piece is about. An argument is what a piece says about what it is about. The two are not the same, and a piece that has a subject but no argument is not yet a piece of writing — it is a topic waiting to become one.

This matters practically because many writers treat the identification of a subject as the identification of a piece. They have something they want to write about — revision, memory, the internet, solitude — and they begin writing towards it, assuming that the piece will find its argument in the process. Sometimes it does. More often, the piece that begins without an argument produces a draft that covers the subject without saying anything about it — competent, sometimes interesting, but ultimately without the point that would make it worth reading.

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Writing the Ending

Writing the ending of a piece is the part most likely to be rushed — and the thing readers are most likely to carry away. For many writers it receives the least deliberate attention: written quickly once the argument is made, treated as a formality after the real work is done.

A good ending does none of these things. It lands. It gives the reader something to take with them — not a summary of the argument, but the argument’s consequence, or its implication, or its most precise formulation. It leaves the piece feeling complete rather than simply finished.

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What to Do When a Piece Isn’t Working

Every writer encounters the problem of when a piece isn’t working — drafts that resist completion, arguments that won’t resolve, writing that feels wrong in ways that are hard to name. Knowing what to do when a piece isn’t working is as much a part of the craft as knowing how to write when it is.

The difficulty is that a piece that isn’t working rarely announces the reason clearly. It presents as a feeling — a vague dissatisfaction, a reluctance to return to the draft, a sense that something is wrong without a clear diagnosis of what. Acting on that feeling productively requires being able to move from the symptom to the cause, and the cause is usually one of a small number of things.

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